19th Century Writing Prompt

The morning fog settled in around them as Eli struggled with the wagon wheel.

“You should have replaced that a week ago like I told you,” admonished Hermoine perched atop the buckboard seat holding the reins. “You never listen to me.”

“As well I shouldn’t,” Eli muttered under his breath.

“What’s that?”

“I said its all the extra weight in the back what’s done it,” said Eli, loud enough for his wife, who was a tad hard of hearing except when he didn’t want her to be, could hear it.

“I am not fat, if that’s what you are implying sir.” She pulled out a small derringer from her purse and pointed it at him. He’d emptied the weapon before they left the homestead this morning to ensure no one would be shot. Her proclivity for waving that pearl-handled gun around in public was well known, and quite possibly why the townsfolk had insisted that the old married couple move to the outskirts of the village proper.

The wagon creaked under the weight of the new harvesting machine Eli had been working on. They were to deliver the machine, all two tonnes of it, with conveyors and wires and a clanky loud motor when it was running, to the train station to be shipped back east where a group of investors waited most anxiously to see if their funding would produce the promised revolution in picking peaches.


Suspense Scene

Mary brought me a slice of warm apple pie, a generous scoop of vanilla ice cream on the side, just the way I like it. A stream of coffee refilled the cup at my elbow. Better to be inside than out in that storm. Things were the way they should be.
The door blew open, rain poured in to the diner. I stood to close it and a flash of lightning revealed the outline of a man in the doorway. Thunder crashed around us as he stepped out of the night and into the fluorescent lighting. Another gust of wind blew the door shut behind the stranger and he stood there, drenched, and leaving an expanding puddle around his feet.
“I need some help,” he said.
My understanding of his countenance changed from seeing a menacing figure to a desperate man, a man on the run. That’s when I noticed the water on the floor was pink and turning red. The lights flickered and went out with another crash of lightning as the man collapsed to the floor.

First Lines

He overlooked it the first time.

The moment he saw her, he knew she was the one.

The soul blossom glittered in the morning light.

She coughed, once, then spat in his face.

Every once in a while, something extraordinary happens.

Her name was Ferocity, and she lived up to it.

The ground shook with every step.

“Get off a my lawn,” was about the only thing anyone recollected he ever said.

His payment hardly covered his expenses.

The train was late; it was never late.

The following case files are sealed by court order.

Icy river water filled his shoes.


Narrator POV

The reason she ran away from home is this: she’d killed her sister. That’s a little imprecise. She’d actually felt responsible for her sister’s death. Yes, that’s more to the point. Blame is always easy to cast about, like spaghetti sauce flinging from the end of a gob of pasta noodles spinning on the end of a fork, and about as difficult to clean up after.

The truth is all nuanced and perspective dependent. One perspective, that of Ferocity, goes something like this.


Make Straight Pathways

It started with one of them thumping into the house. It was the middle of the night so I got up to see what the noise was. When I found the zombie bumping into the side of my house, I guided it around to the back yard and let it shamble off on its own, on toward whatever destination lie before it. The next day here came another, and shortly after that I received a summons from the ZMB, the Zombie Migration Board. Guess one of my neighbors saw the zombies walk into the outside wall of my house and called it in. Probably Peterson. Not that he has much of an affinity or respect for the undead. He doesn’t like me very much. Any chance to cause trouble for me.

Between the summons and the next ZMB court date, I could tell this was going to be a real problem. Zombies tend to follow trails of other zombies. Maybe there’s a scent, or a natural slope they follow like gravity pulling water. Not that anyone really knows how they do that, but once a zombie blazes a new trail, the rest seem to fall into the same steps. They sure found my house. Everyday it was a couple more. I got home from work once to find a half-dozen of them bouncing off the side of my house.

The ZMB court appearance went about as I expected. My property was declared a natural zombie migratory path. Initially they wanted me to tear down the house.  Fortunately for me, they accepted a compromise. Now there’s an archway on the west side of the house, and a gated path through my living room, through the dining room, and out through the garage, with another archway on the east side of the house.

I put up plastic strips hanging down from the arch to keep out the wind and any wild critters, but the undead can follow the path, walk or shamble through the strips, wander through my house in the safety of the gated path, and out the other side, on their way to wherever. Not an easy thing to deal with in the middle of the night, but these paths tend to run their course. I figure in a couple months I’ll be able to file an appeal and patch up the walls once the undead shift to another path. Maybe this time they’ll go through Peterson’s place.